Tanka 14042015

dicing onion…
our way of talking through
all the things
you and I once believed
we held in common

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Tanka 14042015

15 thoughts on “Tanka 14042015

  1. weebluebirdie says:

    And talking when driving, both staring straight ahead, no eye contact!! Leave that one with me while I pop off to manipulate some words and count syllables ๐Ÿ™‚

      1. weebluebirdie says:

        Thank you! I take that as a great compliment – if only WP did blushing emoticons ๐Ÿ™‚

      2. weebluebirdie says:

        o**o This is a starry eyed blushing emoticon! Tenderness on the Block and I have started inventing them to make up for the woeful lack of emoticons in WP. You should see her Elvis ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. I could feel the layers of onion with the feelings of undoing and taking apart a relationship. It is the word, “dicing” that captures me, Kabir. Sounds a little bit violent or hurtful. Crying would or must follow this. . .

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