Tanka 14042015

dicing onion…
our way of talking through
all the things
you and I once believed
we held in common


15 thoughts on “Tanka 14042015

  1. weebluebirdie

    And talking when driving, both staring straight ahead, no eye contact!! Leave that one with me while I pop off to manipulate some words and count syllables πŸ™‚

  2. reocochran

    I could feel the layers of onion with the feelings of undoing and taking apart a relationship. It is the word, “dicing” that captures me, Kabir. Sounds a little bit violent or hurtful. Crying would or must follow this. . .

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