Tanka 15042015

just a chance
the mist on the window
catches my gaze
when you ask how I feel
about us being in love

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Tanka 15042015

16 thoughts on “Tanka 15042015

  1. Elle says:

    light and elusive Kabir. the mist on the window, the uncertainty of love, the brevity of the poem, all perfect.

  2. Misty also makes me think of tears flowing. Maybe nature is telling him it is going to mean heartbreak or it may mean he has been missing being loved. This is such a lovely and interesting tanka.

    1. That’s an interesting way to look at it and I’m grateful for this lovely comment. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. ๐Ÿ™‚ I’m glad you enjoyed this. Have a pleasant Sunday!

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